Tuesday, March 09, 2010

Heat Stroke.

Summer is the time for
Burnt offerings made to a Sun
That cannot look at you
Without sucking you dry.

That smile, that burns
In its scorching benevolence:
Truly derisive
In it's universal bonhomie-
Its complete impartial indifference.

You are merely another.
And he likes you, well and good.
It is only your folly
If you dry yourself up in vain
Every Summer.

10 comments:

Anush said...

ada po pa

Materialmom said...

antidote - iced lemonade, chunks of watermelon, frequent ice cold baths, lie down on cool granite floor

AtomicGitten said...

Anush: Yaen pa? Post pudikillaya?

Mm: Nothing icy about the diabetes inducing lemonade or baths here. as for cool granite floor... I have a very hard bed for a substitute :P

Anush said...

apdi illa, as usual puriala :)

AtomicGitten said...

Anush: Puriyarddukku yenna iruku? Onnu pannu, Jana kitte poetry'le crash-course edu. :D

notgogol said...

I was in Hyd a few of days back. It's getting ridiculously hot there. Best of luck lady. Hope you survive.

@Anush: you are one very entertaining commenter!

P.S. I think you have a fair idea of how much verse I understand :)

AtomicGitten said...

Ng: Half my life in a desert and another chunk of it Chennai have given me great tolerance for heat. But then again Hyd-heat is one of a kind. (hums 'I will survive')And as for verse comprehension, verse comes to worst you'd still get the gist :P

Lokesh Dwivedi said...

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BD said...

Checked out the Frost poem... Quite something...

AtomicGitten said...

Lokesh D: ...?

Nitwitbits: Glad you liked it. Did you see the whole fleeting truth thing?