Saturday, August 04, 2007

Suicide



When purple clouds fill
The skies of life
And rainstorms flood
the ground with fear-
The thing we dread most
Has come to pass:
We are dead to those
We hold most dear.

The soul is gnawed off
The empty shell gapes.
Rotted boards fall off
Among ghostly shapes
A dark stillness haunts-
no heart strikes a beat-
The ashes of time
stick to our feet.

Wild cries turn us hoarse,
Bloody hands,broken doors..
Ripping skin,sinew, bone
Tearing at the human cores.

Silken tethers, burning brands
Curling talons, iron hands
Softly strangle flying hope
Twisting on a hanging rope.

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6 comments:

viplove said...

seems unfinished for me
and ..why only about hanging ?

Anush said...

unfinished a? so this person above actually understood this post a? hmmm... commendable... [:)]

AtomicGitten said...

viplove: Unfinished? Hmm.. that's new. The most i got from all those I showed this was-"What's wrong with you? See a shrink!". Only hanging? well i thought we'll go one at a time. :D Seriously- that's what flowed out with the ink.

Crazybugga: Yes,yes you would find several others who agree with you. This post belongs under neurotic-psychotic free writing. Like yours?;)

Both: Many thanks for the critical insights :D

Anush said...

Hello... who are u calling psychotic? the literature that comes outta me wud put even the great Romantic poets to shame... it's their good fortune that i dint exist back then... or else there wud have been only one name in all ur English poetry and prose books... and the govt. of india wud have promptly banned all those... [:P]

AtomicGitten said...

Crazybugga: Indeed? No comment :D

smoke said...

Well, atomic, can you really take the word of someone called CRAZYBUGGA seriously?! Hehe... Well I fall into the category of the psychological-help-promoters when it comes to this poem. I never commented cos it's just kinda disturbing :P And YEAH i take you seriously. DEAD seriously, literally! :D