Tuesday, March 04, 2008

An Appetite For Desire

When was the last time she'd felt this way? July,2000? September 1998? No, those were nothing compared to this . She'd never felt this way before. This terrible need that coursed through her entire body. This all consuming urge that ached in the pit of her stomach. she clenched her hands into hard fists to keep from reaching out.

"No!" she shuddered.

"You know you want it.." He whispered into her ear, his voice was velvet temptation."It's all for you," He breathed. "All you have to do is reach out and..."

She clasped her arms around herself and groaned inwardly as she felt her will bending. No! She mustn't! She desperately hung on to the edge of control.

"I can't-"
"Of course you can."
"It's wrong-"
"Of course not."
No! She shouldn't! But even as these thoughts careened accross her inflamed brain, she felt herself let go of the last vestiges of restraint.

"I'll never forgive you for this!" She said thickly, and heard his dark chuckle.Hungrily, she reached out and took a bite into the forbidden.

...

Several minutes later-

"Damn you, you stupid ass!That diet was actually working and you had to come with chocolate mousse!!"

5 comments:

Materialmom said...

Great parody of the 80s Mills&Boon style.
Congrats on the prize.

AtomicGitten said...

Lol! I try. And thanks :)

Anush said...

i wil read this again before i go to sleep

Jan said...

Hehe, sorry, atomic, you know I knew what it was the first time I read it... It was shortly after the Ecstacy experience so it wasn't such a difficult guess. (really, materialmom, that's not as bad as it sounds! :D )Your love affair with chocolate n all.

Er... crazybugga's reaction is... interesting, wouldn't you say? Hehehe... Congrats on 60+ posts

-Jan (too lazy to sign out of my alternate i.d.)

AtomicGitten said...

Crazybugga: Er...Ahem...sweet dreams :)

Smoke: Lol! Hey those chocolates were out out of this world. Better yet they were free :D. And thanks, i should have a jubilee celebration eh? ;)