Monday, April 21, 2008

Mowing Grass

A after a long spell of interminable prose now we have worse- verse.(Heh heh, I couldn't resist).

Iron Blades flatten
Life
Into rows of unrelieved
Flatness.
The Fruits of a struggle:
Of weeks, of months,
Of Eternities-
Cut down in an act
Of Brutal Order.

The scent of fresh, green
Blood
Wafted in the golden morning breeze.
Over the roar of the barbaric beast,
Came the cry of dying dreams;
Answered by hollow echoes
As life was sliced,
Ripped,torn-
Ground into a dull,briny mash.

The Others watch unmoved.
Doing nothing to stop the ruin.
"This must done."
"Order must be maintained"
What does it matter,
If all is Crushed and Killed.

The heartless blades continue
To rip and chew and spit out
Verdant carcasses
With burping satisfaction.
The soft tender stalks
Buckle and snap
Under the weight
Of cold oppression-
The beacon of Order.

Now all that remains
Is a field of flat sameness
Of broken spirits,
Lost ideals,squashed creativity...
Congratulations!
Order has been achieved!
The cost?
Only a few lives,
A few hopes
A few dreams...
The Greater Good has been achieved!
And after all,
Don't we all serve order?

6 comments:

Jan said...

Hey I remember when you wrote this one! :D What a coincidence that you should post this now... Check out my blog!

Jan said...

...And it's even more interesting after reading Mrs Dalloway and all that jazz about proportion and conversion :)

Anush said...

"Order has been achieved!
The cost?
Only a few lives,
A few hopes
A few dreams...
The Greater Good has been achieved!
And after all,
Don't we all serve order?"


So are u an anarchist?

Order is necessary, and shud be enforced. Not everyone is born with moral values. If they did, the world wud be perfect. They need something to be afraid of. And dont paint 'enforcing order' in such dark colors. Its not all that bad. NAZI Germany soared to new heights after the acceptance of Hitler. A. Order based on flimsy principles would never last anyway.

AtomicGitten said...

Jan:Yeah- second year, when they were clearing the NCC grounds. Wise women think alike :D

Crazybugga: Spoken like a true tyrant. I'm no anarchist.I'm against an unnatural order that parades as natural and roots out the natural. And that kind of order is not the right kind. And "flimsy principles" is what is supporting this kind of bigotist order.

Materialmom said...

appropriate post for Earth Day 22nd april.domination over nature is bad, tho i admit to killing cockroaches...
Taming of the wild is what civilisation is all about, be it an individual or society.With the right perspective it is good, but blind compliance isn't.

AtomicGitten said...

MaterialMom: the problem is that there is no perspective. The stronger force deems what is wild and what isn't. That's what happened with the Native Americans.
History is written by the winner.